wait I accidentally deleted this please I need it back

In part because I know translations can be rough at times.  In the case any of this was fixed by the later patch since I downloaded this when it was first released, do ignore what you are already aware of.

Are they Albino or Artic Wolves?  Albinos can only have red eyes.

The car ride and weather report will need editing, one of the biggest hassles of translating is tenses and telling adjectives and adverbs apart.  There is in a fair number of places extra or misplaced letters on words.

Tennis Ace perhaps? hehe!

I can't tell if its intentional or not, as I can't tell if its the way Japan's education system differs from the US, but they can't both be going to high school if he graduated from high school, so is he going to a College or University?

Foreshadowing much? X3

Really nice sound track pairing! Heh metajoke too! ^^ He makes me think of space... knew it first time I saw him in the dev logs though! ^^;  I get nervous in new situations too, but I tend to shut down instead of overdrive...  The tour glazed over the details, but I can only assume that later on more in depth detail will be given upon actually going to those locations.  Class was glazed over as well, nothing mentioned of note of the other students, but otherwise good enough for keeping brief.  I think I'm going to have to expect that daily interactions are not going to be focused on much.  But it would help add atmosphere and immersion.  Though it is a bit sudden the intense level of attraction, but I have to say that its only a difference of preference and way of thinking.  Just met and already wanting to sleep with this guy!?

Its true that we do not need to know of others issues or personal struggles, unless they feel good enough to confide in us, or the information becomes important or relevant to share.  I'm of a curios sort so I will ask, but I won't try to pry too much further, and may ask again a good while later, depending on response given.  I myself tends to be an open book, but only when it once again feels relevant enough to share. If we do not voice our struggles, then we may not get help we may not realize we need to overcome them.  Feeling alone is never good.  It is a balance between respecting and caring about another, but patience is key.

Yep jumping to conclusions bothers me a a lot, but I must be mindful that this is his personality, that you have given him.

Aaannddd... nothing on the pickup, or the candy store... and seriously? Complaining about the brother when you were already fawning over this guy??? *facepaw*  This is what is referred to as a Catch Twenty-Two, if you show so much interest in something, you can't not be teased about it.  You can't have both.  That is also why the Golden Rule exists.

Ugg.. jealousy and judgementalism without a word prior? I SERIOUSLY despise "Shoot First" types!  Unfortunately what follows is the ideal scenario that doesn't stand to happen much, especially in the US..., no one bothers to find out both sides of the story and ask questions of why. :/  Suspended for three days, expulsion is technically permanent.

Big error! How can they play at 5 p.m., if classes don't end until 5:10 p.m.???

This cat has issues, but if he he can admit he is/was wrong, he is already better than many others.  Even so, regardless of the reasons, doing the right thing can be hard, because you know you messed up.

Uhm... they never played that game together..., or did they?  I'm now getting the feeling that this is to illustrate how scatterbrained this poor guy is...  Goddarnit! This is a serious situation, and they are messing with his heart! DXD

The drama club making a fuss over something... being DRAMAtic... did they not SPECIFY enough what they wanted??? ugh..., lack of communication is sufferocating!!!  That anchor... its synonymous with drowning, with goign nowhere, with being your very own grave... if your referencing THAT novel that is... ugh... that damn novel...  I value disciplinary action and accountability, but it is also important to follow up with getting to the root or cause of the problems to prevent them from happening again..., this however directly contradicts the no prying from earlier, which in turn can make the executor stand out out as cold and uncaring, the exact opposite of what you intend his character to be.  Lack of understanding does wonders to cause chaos.  It requires a balance between being both firm and sensitive.  Do not just punish, but also find a better way forward, otherwise the situation can happen again, and worse.

Nice meeting this other cat??? There was hardly any talking!

Back to him..., the fact that he has acknowledged he is a bit of a jerk, and is wanting to talk things out, stands to say that despite his impulsiveness, that he can be reasoned with, and what better way to help resolve differences then sharing?  You hardly see this amount of self awareness these days...  Well that tune is one way to say "Bad Boy".

Rain is both calming and a mood dampener for me, even can put me asleep, as  long as I'm inside, I don't mind too much.  I tend to be really sweet, its no wonder I almost killed myself Type 1 style! (Half Joking, Half Serious)  Teaching is nice, but does it do much good if the one being taught doesn't do the actions themselves?  Practice makes perfect they say!

Need For Speed or Fast and Furrious? oy...  Went to Shibuya, eh? Hope you didn't find any Reapers!!! XD  Ah two guy loving their Raw Men! Ok now that was funny inner monologue! XD  Hrm.. I do feel that eventually the CGs will need a redoing/touch up, but for now their intention is clear enough!  And again share only those things when it feels right and natural.

A squealer next? Almost intentional after that necklace...

I agree love, just as much as respect and friendship, it must be earned, nto demanded or expected, and it also must be maintain in order to keep things strong no matter how far you may drift apart (figuratively and literally), for it will also help with reconnection.

Mhm... one of the biggest messages I try to get out there, there will eventually be an exception to your perception of something, but until you find that exception your judgement can be marred and distorted.  I don't take issue with many things unless they are on a fundamental, psychological, or sociological level.  In all cases its about one group not thinking through how their actions impact others, including those they claim to be fight for.  For that reason is why I seek to ask questions in order to understand, but getting no answers, hostility, or judgement back, only serves to prove evidence that there is reason to think down on them, for they are standing in their own way.  It not about who they are, its about the actions they take.  Be a living and caring being, nothing is all about your wants and demands, the world won't bend to you just because you want it to.  I have come to also realize that hate is merely a shorter way for lack of understanding.  That also includes though be disallowed to understand or refusal to understand the other point of view, and once things get too negative, no one is ever going to listen.  This is positivity and trying to be constructive, or even call out ones own possible misconceptions is important, because it shows that you are aware that you don't know everything.  I'm smart, but I'm nota genius, and most certainly do not know everything, for if I have never been exposed to it, how would I ever know, let alone be expected to know?  It is very unfair to automatically expect others to treat you properly if you think that hey should just know, it is a reverse way of judging a book by its cover, by assuming the ways others are going to act towards you without even getting to know them.

Still though too much negative emotion built up will eventually lead to an outburst of some kind, unless the issue is dealt with before it gets out of control.  Disarm the bomb that others don't realize they are only arming.  It can go off in some of the most unexpected ways, and even cause a chain or ripple effect from one overflow to the next.

Sad part is that even those who are discriminated against discriminate others, and go as far as to assume they are being discriminated against, just because they are approached by someone who is not their kind.  People who support them and have the means to keep this in check often ignore this fact, and therefore enable this behavior.  This is what is called a double standard, one of which directly opposes the objectives of equality, making it a Catch 22, because of the Golden Rule, and one of the highest forms of Hypocrisy.  You can't fight something by doing the very thing back without having a proper direction or targets, otherwise you are blindly lashing out, causing fear and dissent.  No one is goign to want to help those who can't help themselves, when they are in perfect condition of doing so (as those physically or psychologically unable to are outliers/exceptions to this).  Again respect must be earned, only through understanding, only through learning, only through talking.  We all have feelings, neglect them and you will find yourself alone or surrounded by fakers.

Being in a good position to helps others is a good opportunity to do exactly that.  It is important to take care of oneself, but don't be stingy either when it comes to others.  A little give and take or sharing is ideal for being able to continue supporting each other.

Naivety of ignoring the warnings signs that something is off, but be sure to mention something if it gets worse!  No one sane wants to be a burden to others, but sometimes need to let others help you, this is another tie into prior, but this time it is health concern.  They are already worried!  Trying to act tough is no good if you are subjecting yourself to harm without good reason.  trying to run from or ignore your problems isn't good either.  Part of being able to move on is being able to address or overcome them.  While this is a smaller scenario, ignoring the others concerns IS insensitive...

I know its described as a simple recipe, but surely he who does not know how to cook would make some small errors?  Well I guess that is one thing to go horribly wrong!  Spice does help clear sinuses though!  My dad can't grocery shop to save his life either! ^^;  Ha! X3 All Dees Goods!

Yep that damnation Novel... so damn off from its original concept...  Well I guess I can't tell which novel those lines were referring to, clever!

It would be adorable to see them both in their PJs!  Carrot cake is one of my favorites too, top three or five!  Awww... too bad this wolf isn't important enough to have an image or sprite ^^;

Now that is truly deplorable of HIM...  being able to care about others is very important.  Shouldn't lil bro have invited over some of his friends too?

When you take things for granted and it suddenly bites you in the rear! ^^;  mmm Psychology! And subject on something I do think about a lot, and I do indeed myself lack proper Motivation and Drive.  Isolation, disconnection, understanding, feelings, all words I have used often in regards to behaviors.  Wait he smoked!? Was not expecting that detail.  In the night I am more thoughtful and pensive as well.

Well that is something you don't find everyday!  Yay more BFs! XD

Wow... this was a lot..., while I find the story/plot a bit lacking in details/elaboration, it is heavy on its many messages that I all care a great deal about.

First time read it and I loved it so much can wait for more updates in the future <3

I love this vn so much keep up the good work HachiDoggo <3

Finally!!! Thank you so much. My spanish really sucks and i was waiting for an english translation. I absolutely love it!

I love this vn. The fact that the MC is a car guy is epic as I love cars too. And I wanna see more....I don't know which guy to choose to date...I love all of them. Anyway, I love this VN. Great work you did and finally you got an english translator for this. Happy I can now read this vn without the google translator app